English Mock Feedback

Job
Discuss the authors purpose – what are his reasons for writing this story? What does he want us to realise or think about. Use quotes to back it up.
Make clear links to society and where this problem is seen.
Add insight about the possible causes of family violence and conflict.

Unfamiliar Text
The right idea good exemplars, however talk about adjectives or similes or emotive language. Or even 1st person narration and the quotes.

The Secret Life of Walter Mitty
Expand on the links.
Link evidence to the character.
Label each quote as dialogue.
Explain why each example is relevant and how it answers the question.
If possible add more dialogue and visual and oral features.
Check spelling and grammar

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